Critique

During our critique we realised we had strayed slightly from the brief in that we hadn't portrayed Kaitiakitanga and sustainability enough in our work. This was easily fixed by added another element to our work. Previously we had zombies taking over the market. Zombies being a negative connotation  we now have the zombies represent big corporations and businesses that are over taking the fun loving and unique and crafted market people for a bland office building vibe market where the zombies live. This is represented when the zombies chase the humans out of their markets and take them over making the the stalls less unique and creative and more similar and dull. The bright streamers and signs and colours will fall off and the zombies will be on a conveyor belt moving down the market with zombies on it showing the fast paced (zombies are slow so this helps convey that idea by putting them on the belt) environment that is very bland.