Second Critique

Talking to the teachers we decided that first off, we needed to make the market place more obviously a market. This could easily be achieved just by putting a sign up. We also wanted to do the same thing to the graveyard and also for the zombie market at the end just to give clarification. Also to clarify the zombies representing businesses we need to create a generic logo to put on the gravestone that we are zooming in on.

Next off we decided that we could even just work with the big long picture made using Illustrator and Photoshop. This meant we cut out the scene from the zombies point of view walking down the market and replace it with a long-shot from the original picture with the zombies dispersing down the market and just zooming in and out when need be to focus on certain parts. The zombies also didnt need to be moving so much they could just 'waddle' in a way like south park characters instead of having so much detail. This meant the image had to be very large to be able to work with.